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I will get inside your head
I will invade your heart
I thrill the chills down the spines of the dead
My will is the change from finish to start

I'll expand your joy
I'll disolve your doubt
This writing I speak is not a toy
It will teach you the ins and outs

From here on end you shall see
For truly it is no crime
Loving of life is the thing to be
Forever seeing is life yet love is blind

Life must guide love
Love must guide life
They fit together like hand and glove
They see each other through laughter and strife

This is the first lesson I give to you
And more than scarcely you know its true
And more than always you shan't forget
That these are the lips of the Anonymous Poet
©2004-2009 ~AnonymousPoet
:iconanonymouspoet:

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I will get inside your head
I will invade your heart
I thrill the chills down the spines of the dead
My will is the change from finish to start

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:iconshadowedpoet:
heh. u need to work on the flow of the poem...welcome to day :hug: you'll get a lot of comments on how to improve your work.

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I'll do anything to please...
:iconanonymouspoet:
That was one of my favorite poems. I know it needs work but I leave it in it's purest form because it's special to me for a special reason.
:iconshadowedpoet:
yes well...just because you work on a poem doesnt mean its not pure. but its up to u.

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I'll do anything to please...
:iconpunkturedstranger:
Don't listen to what anyone else says how it makes you feel is all that matters you write for you not for anyone else besides i thought it was good

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